Using my sences to describe an object

Kia Ora Blogging world,

I have created a screencastify of me reading my writing, I have described an orange using my 5 scenes, smell, taste, feel, touch, and hear. Does my writing make sense, is it detailed enough for you to imagine what I am writing. If something does not seem right, please give me feedback.

Thank you,
Sincerely, Gargee

Screencastify of me reading my work